Oceans … memories … slap the shore
Seaweed’s confusion … hungry for more
Floating aimlessly … piles of debris
Knots ‘n tangles … captivity
Continuous surges … underscore
Wadded debris … on reality’s shore
Tangles ‘n webs … forever to be
Time’s passing gaps … actuality.
Copyright/ Sheila Grimes/ June 24, 2014
Comments on: "Actuality" (5)
I really like this one; it flows nicely and has a good rhythm.
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Thank you Susan, rhythm is good!
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How frustrating. 😮
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I am back from my holidays now….how is your Mom ?
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Mother is good! Daily grind as usual.
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